How's My Driving?

This one is for Jacob Howland, the reincarnation of Yurick from The Last Story. Tell me what you think? Are there things I could be doing better? Am I just awesome? All input is valuable, so don't be afraid to speak up. I have anonymous on for your convenience.

Information Post

Name: Jacob Howland
Age: 22
Occupation: Flower shop manager
Location: Shepherd's Haven
Appearance: Before the echoes, his eyes are light blue and he has blond hair, tied in a ponytail, that reaches down to his shoulders. He stands at 5' 9" and is slender. He has some natural muscle and tone. He tends to layer his clothes, his favourite outfit having a long-sleeved black shirt under a short-sleeved button up, leaving the front open, with jeans and workers boots. He occasionally likes to wear jewelry as well. His ears are pierced three times on either side. After the echoes, his hair becomes silver and his right eye obscured by the stone from his previous life.

Application: Here you go.
HMD: And here.

Echoes:

First echo: Tier 1 - Physical : He gains his silver hair and memories of a castle with his Number.

Second echo: Tier 1 - Object/Physical : He obtains the stone in his right eye, the source of his magical power.

Third echo: Tier 1 - Memory : In attacking a mugger in secret, he recalls a time when attacking a monster in secret, casting a fire spell. He gains memories of using, and the ability to use, his fire magic at the most basic level.

Fourth Echo: Tier 1 - Memory : He regains the memories of his fear of ghosts.

Fifth Echo: Tier 1 - Memory : The ghost resembles Zael, one of Jacob's teammates from his past life. He gets back brief memories of a team and a specific one where he tells Zael, after saving him, that "We're friends, aren't we?"

Sixth Echo: Tier 1 - Memory : As he shows his eye to Tony, he remembers doing the same for Zael, discussing it as the source of his power and how that power might consume him.

Seventh Echo: Tier 1 - Memory : Upon using the teleporter for the first time, he remembers the time Yurick goes off to one door on his own, to which he says his father's blood runs through him. Lowell shakes his head and says that Yurick just needs a hug before they all go through their respective doors, promising too meet each other again. In his own room, Yurick fights down his enemies and sits sadly for a moment. He tells himself that he can't rely on others forever and promises to make his dad proud.